Amara:
9/28
I enjoyed reading your post on men and women communication. Your story of how you and your husband experienced communication problem just as Tannen described and you now understand why his "silent attention" is still listening. The one part that I can say needs improvement is that I didn't not get to know much about the article other than the exact quote that answered your communication issues.
9/30
The post on monogamous humans was a very good explanation of the article and I feel that you hit on the all the important issues that were discussed. The only thing I could find is that at a point it got a little repetitive and the same things were being said for a second time.
Hilary:
9/28
Your post on communication between men and women was well written and put together very well. I like how you started with some back round information on your relationships and how the article has affected you and your partners communication. I feel like your post could have had more quotes and given a little more in site to what the author was thinking.
9/30
Your post on "Our Cheating Hearts" was very described and well organized. I feel that you got a lot of points across and anyone reading this post would know what it was about. The only part that I would change is there may be to much information for it to be an overview of the article. There are parts where some of the information is not necessarily needed.
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